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What do you guys think of my new manga concept Fallen Angel? 

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Dragon Ball Minus / Bardock: The father of Goku

 

What you are going to read below is my attempt at combining and making sense of the two titles above...

 

We will start with what we are scrapping

Goku being a baby when being sent off (FOG)

Beginning of minus we will swap the mystery Saiyan Bardock is working with out with his actual team

Goku being sent off 3mo before the destruction on planet Vegeta (DB Minus)

Ok now to begin mashing.....

 

The story will start with the events on planet Kanasa

After all the planets inhabitants are seemingly destroyed, Bardock and his crew Fasha Tora Borgos and Shugesh are celebrating their victory when a remaining Kanassan Warrior jumps from the rubble and catches Bardock off guard. He gave Bardock the ability to see into the future... Bardock faints and his crew takes him back to planet Vegeta. During his recovery he gets all types of visions of future events such as the destruction of planet Vegeta at Frieza’s hands along with visions of his son Kakarott fighting against Frieza. He soon awakens and brushes the visions off as just a dream. He is then informed that his team was preparing to set out on another mission so he rushes off to catch up with them before they leave. He and his team are off on missions nonstop for the next two years going from planet to planet never stopping home. One day while He and his team are on a distant planet ridding it of its inhabitants for lord Frieza.

They get a message from (Base)

All Saiyans must return to planet Vegeta immediately!

Bardock now very paranoid due to his frequent visions quickly becomes suspicious...

They all quickly finish off the remaining inhabitants and begin to talk with one another.

It’s been a while since we’ve been back says Fasha... Yeah, I’ve never heard of anything like this before says Borgos

I’d like to know what this is all about. Apparently it was an order from that damn Frieza himself says Bardock. Hahaha Bardock always thinking someone is out to get you! Your thinking too much says Tora.

Whatever lets go replies Bardock as he walks toward his pod.

They all enter their pods and take off for planet Vegeta...

As they approach Bardock notices Frieza’s ship outside and gets a very bad feeling. Just then another vision of the destruction of Planet Vegeta flashes before his eyes. Bardock keeps this to himself like always he knew the others would just laugh it off and call him crazy. When they land he goes home and warns his wife Gine about it. She brushes it off saying Bardock is too paranoid.  He then asks where their son Raditz is she tells him he’s on a mission with prince Vegeta then he turns to look at his youngest son in his incubator. He demands they send him away but she believes Bardock is just being silly and needs rest and refuses.

Meanwhile in space Frieza talks with Dadoria and Zarbon .They inform him that it will take a good three months before most of the Saiyans return home ... Just then they receive news that Bardock and his team have returned from their last mission. Recent news reveals that the Saiyans' strength constantly grows after each battle. Zarbon informs Frieza that the specific a band of low-class Saiyans that just returned had taken over Kanassa in just a few days. Dodoria states that the job to take Kanassa had been in the pool for months, and that not even Frieza's elite squadrons could take Kanassa so easily Dadoria and Zarbon suggest that Frieza handles this group of Saiyans soon stating that in three months’ time they may become strong enough to rival most if not all of Frieza’s elites.. Frieza laughs this off but to humor them Dodoria and his elite fighters are ordered to eradicate Bardock and his teammates.

The next day Bardock is being checked out in the “hospital” claiming something is wrong with his head. Meanwhile his team is given another mission directly from Frieza himself to clear the civilization of Planet Meat and are ordered to set out immediately.

Bardock is still in the healing chamber a series of test are being performed on him. Just then Bardock gets another one of those visions again of the same thing the destruction of planet Vegeta at the hands of Lord Frieza followed by a vision of his son.  The Doctor stops the test he feels something is going wrong so they pull him out of the chamber Bardock seems normal and insists he’s fine and asks about his team. The doctor informs him that they were sent out on a mission some hours ago by Lord Frieza himself while Bardock was being tested. Bardock excited by the news puts his armor on and takes off running.  

He runs into Gine who is standing outside of (the infant recruit room….in the window you can see young kakarott having a series of test being performed on him). He tells her he’s going on a mission directly from Frieza and is happy about his team finally being recognized he hugs her and continues to run. He and goes to join his team on Planet Meat, but soon finds out his friends are all dead. Bardock's team was defeated by Dodoria and his elites. He battles the ones responsible, easily defeating them all, but is overwhelmed by a single mouth blast from Dodoria. He is left for dead, but manages to survive and make it back to Planet Vegeta. He passes a pod containing his son Kakarott on the way in. Bardock attempts to inform the Saiyans of the danger that they are all, since he has now realized that Frieza is going to destroy them all, everyone laughs at his claim and Bardock sets out by himself on one final assault against Frieza.

Bardock succeeds in killing many of Friezas minor soldiers and sends a Final Spirit Cannon to Frieza himself. However, Frieza counters this with his Supernova, which “kills: Bardock, many of his own soldiers, and destroys Planet Vegeta itself, Frieza is seen laughing at its destruction, as well as telling Dodoria and Zarbon to watch the fireworks. After his demise, Bardock wishes his son, Kakarot, to take care. At the same moment, Kakarot, who is still in the space pod, wakes up.

Elsewhere, having just completed an assignment on a far-off world, Vegeta Raditz and nappa are informed of their homeworld's destruction. Prince vegetas pride keeps him from expressing his shock, and he remains outwardly emotionless. Soon afterward, Kakarot's space pod touches down on Earth, where he is found by an elderly man named Gohan Goku eventually falls down off the cliff and bumps his head and you guys know the rest....

If it were to continue the events of Episode of Bardock would take place.. I don’t find anything in EoB altered the actual story so I wouldn’t change anything there but I will point out my theory .  Considering the fact that DBO is canon and the events in EoB did take place in DBO one can conclude that EoB did happen .. People don’t see it this way and argue that Bardock is not the ssj of legend BUT the way I see it is that the “ Ice-Jin “ and the Saiyans both speak of two different legends. This makes sense considering vergetas storys of the ssj consist of the Golden ape and in his story the ssj of legend could only maintain this state in the golden ape form etc the “Ice-Jin” however speak of the actual ssj form that we all know from the actual series …

What do you guys think... someone should do it in comic form lol...

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De'Andre
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My Name is De'Andre Moffett AKA Moffett1990.
I'm the creator , writer ,and Original artist of Dragon Ball SQ .
I do all of my images using MS Paint. Unless its a sketch :P I never bothered learning how to use other programs so MS Paint and a mouse is how I do it .... For effects I draw them in paint as well but then I use Gamemaker 8Pro to make them look the way I want like transparent have a glow etc .. after my images are done i shrink them down to smooth out the lines :D

Born:12/19/90
I have two kids
and Im a erie metropolitan transit authority "EMTA" Driver

Any questions fan mail etc you can note me here or email me at deandrelmoffett@gmail.com

I do accept commissions by Nana-Beats I do not accept requests by Nana-Beats

Original Dragonball Fan Button by Brinx-dragonballSQ Crystal Black Star Dragonballs Fan Button by Brinx-dragonball








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:iconoraclemanga:
Oraclemanga Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
;///W////; Thank yooooooou <3 <3 <3
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
No problem the art was great
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Oraclemanga Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for faving Reigning Unova!! <3
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
i see but there one thing i  promble weith dbo  way wood majin buu care to lvie that fa rin future of hercle is dead  that tyoll mis up mian part fo buu saga   buu dos not want see ehervle dead as we saw ein buu sgaa so way wood he want to olvie wit him for

all the years and of buu rally had power to vast spells on anther buu way did he not do  to eivbl buu to turn him good  that to make dbo not make secne  we all the gods war not talked in dbo how humon wish to ebcoem saiyan fo sheronc ant turn thr andorids humon tha tto me don't make secne

 dbgt sheorna i can see bein gbale to dot hat he  utmaimte sheorna stronger then nroa sherona but e oaml green sehroan i don't see how he can do it
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Because none of the material with bardock in it before dragonball minus is created by akira .. in DB Minus that is his design of Bardock and the way he says the story goes ..
I dont fully agree with DB Minus tho I wrote my own version of all the bardock stories moffett1990.deviantart.com/jou…
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
mybe you can awsner me this way is bardock waring vegeta saytian sgaa amror in  gine manga yet in orignalo dbz manga fireza flahs back eh waring  vegeta cell games armor and in space  fighting fireza

when did he have tiem chgine his amror  i don't get it or did airka forget what armor bartdock war   back then
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
I see  and nice :)
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Probably a couple episodes or something ... I have written stuff from dreams
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
yea :) I wnder of airka his  based dbz event of deram  he had

I ask I  I once right  in anime story based off I deram I had
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Good ;)
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
o  ok issee I get it now :)
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Asking a friend to draw them is one thing .. That's you finding a partner to do your work with BUT someone seeing your pic and then wanting to do a fan pic is another
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
how so  I cant draw my oc,s  I unable to draw  but I stlel take time to come up with them right them in storys  how is asking firned to draw them not make them ccont I never be able to  brifgn the to life with out  help of my firends

ask his hlrp form his eidter in his manga
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Now see if I drew a picture of your OC because I liked it then it would be fan art because I'm not the creator ... If I made up a story about your OC it would be fan made because I'm not the creator .. Even if you decided to use the story as canon a fan of the character made it
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silverhedgehog2009 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
firned you take look at my oc dawn tell em what you think fav.me/d7xg2js

 
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UltimateVegetaKai Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
It's based on the multiverse theory in which a small band of saiyan children escape Vegetaseii's destruction and search their whole lives for other saiyans, prince vegeta, and frieza, who they find during his fight with Vegeta on namek.
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I may be able to help BUT I'm very limited with time I work a good 10 hrs every day in my spare time I am with my children or working on one of my own projects. If you send me some details about your first chapter or the series as a whole I may be able to help you come up with a cover and possibly do a rough sketch
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UltimateVegetaKai Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Moffett help! Before I even THINK about uploading Wrath of The Saiyans, I need an official cover. I'm asking you as a fellow worker of Dragon Ball fan manga to try and make me a cover. Do it any way you want. If not just tell me
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:D thanks dbsq ep 1 should be out in a good 4-5 months
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Prydzanimation Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Very Impressed with what I'm seeing for Db SQ . Maybe our ep 1s will be released around the same time. Keep it up !!!!
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sonicluke Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  New member
ok :)
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Unfortunately I dont have much time for tournaments 
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sonicluke Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  New member
Hi want to be in a tournament? thewwjdsquad.deviantart.com/jo…
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leothechimera2056 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh ok thats awesome dude
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Moffett1990 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Sweet
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